IELTS B Writing Test 1 Task 2 學生範文(with 評語)－艾倫休閒小舖

How important is the patient's mental attitude towards his/her treatment in determining the effectiveness of the treatment?

No matter what kind of medical treatment a patient chooses, it is the patient’s mental attitude that determines the effectiveness of the treatment. The attitude includes the cooperation with doctors and the faith in them, particularly keeping the optimistic attitude during the treatment period.

The different medical treatments lead to different effects. The traditional treatment comes from the ancient experiences. In Oriental countries, we often use the acupuncture or herbal medicine that can modify your body conditions and enable you to be stronger. People believe that moderate therapies are not harmful to your health. From the perspective of Chinese medicine, all the diseases are from the weakness of your internal organs. To strengthen your organs is the essential way to keep healthy. Moreover, they believe there is a circulation in human body and is influenced by the changes of four seasons. As a result, these theories and experiences remained and continuously be used for thousand years. (此段有點離題，沒有提到病患心理狀態)

In spite of the number of advantages in traditional treatment, I prefer to trust the scientific data and treatment. Generally speaking, the effectiveness of western medical cure is more obvious. According to the scientific analysis, people can realise what will cause the illness which can be cured by accurate medicine or treatments. In the meantime(其實in the meantime指得是”同時，在這段等待/空缺時間，我們可以去….), the Western medicine can ease your pain and shorten the duration of treatment.

Last but not least, the patients should cooperate with your doctors who can give you the best advises. Take the tablet on time and more rest. The most important point is that keep in a good mood. God help those who help themselves.